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Plushy-Price DTA entry 2

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Published: Feb 26, 2014

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***Edit: Look people, I am already aware that this character us 'mary-sue-ish'. I realized it before I posted the picture a while ago. I was discussing it with my sister and said, "Bet this bloody thing is going to be called a mary-sue". And wasn't be realistic when I typed how far she jumped(I was FLIPPING KIDDING. And besides, this is a flipping world with magical-everlasting-sparkle ponies like oh-some-sparkly-alicorn-princess-Twilight. Who can do anything. This is a fandom where anything can happen. So SOD off my stuff. Just look at Cadence of TS - their mary-sue-ish. 'Specially Cadence.
The rainboom-thing was based off of another DTA I did, where a pegasus got a rainbow-streak from doing a TRB, so I got the idea that the more RB there is, more streaks added to the body/ect.
Thanks for ruining my story and love of this character, freaks. I spent loads of time on this and was proud of it, tell all you people started bashing me.
SOD OFF.
Thats why I never joined this fandom - to many rude people.

Another DTA entry! I'm lucky I finished this one time! I've been working on this picture the whole month almost! I have over 30layers(each labeled, thank heaves)

Anyways, this DTA is another from

from here-plushy-prince.deviantart.com/a…

(I'm trying for the RarityXG3Rarity

I typed the bio below - OH, and before anyone starts with the "Ooooh nooo...ANOTHER butterfly-winged mary sue pony character?" She wasn't BORN with the wings. As I have listed below, she uses the same spell Twilight Sparkle did to give Rarity wings, only a different design. The 'Rainboom Form' vanishes off of her when she takes the wings off with her magic.) anyways, bio below:

Name: Garnet Flare

Gender: Female

Type: Unicorn

Parents: Soarin and Rainbow Dash

CutieMark: A rainbow diamond, with rainbow lightning bolt and sparkles. (This represents her love off fashion, and her fast flying as a unicorn)

BIO:

Garnet Flare surprisingly, even though she may not look it, is 100% the unadopted daughter of the famous pegasus' Soarin and Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dashes first thought upon seeing her baby were, "Oh my god! Oh my god! It looks nothing like Soarin'! Did I cheat with any white Unicorns?! Well, there was that Blue Blood guy but I don't think I ever got near him..."

Soarins' first thoughts were more along the lines of: "OH NO! My WIFE! My WIFE cheated on me! WHY RAINBOW DASH!? WHY?!?!??!"

The blue pegasus' and her husband looked skeptical at the baby the nurse was carrying, all rapped up in a bundle of cloth. "That," the mare said, "Is NOT my baby!"

The nurse looked slightly shocked and offended at how the mother was talking to her baby. As the nurse was about to say something back, the doctor walked in carrying a large piece of paper with numbers and squiggly lines printed on it. "Ma'am, that IS you're baby." Soarin' and Rainbow Dash both looked as if they wanted to object, but were cut off. "I have some files from a few blood tests you and you're husband did a while back, and to be sure I tested you're baby a few minutes ago. Her DNA matches BOTH of yours."

The blue pegasus' jaw dropped. "But...but..." she stuttered, searching for words. "But she's a UNICORN! And we're both pegasus'! And neither of our parents or grandparents were unicorns!"

The doctor smiled knowingly. "Ahh, but this happens occasionally. Albeit, it is extremely rare that this will happen, but it will all the same."

"What do you mean?" The blue stallion asked. "A pegasus...having a unicorn? Or the other way around?"

"Yes." He replied. "It is extremely rare for it to happen, but sometimes a foal will be born that is the opposite species of the parents. These foals usually are known to grow up and accomplish great magical or physical abilities. The most rare thing about them -"

"Besides the fact that their an opposite species?" Rainbow Dash cocked an eyebrow.

"Yes, besides that - It that their DNA test comes up showing 100% of the opposite species. You're daughters DNA test says she is 100% pegasus' even though she isn't."

The news seemed to shock both the young parents. Their first three triplets were ALL pegasus' and resembled the parents. But here the doctor was claiming, with seemed proof to back it up, that they had just produced a unicorn, instead of a pegasus. And not only that, the little filly was snow white. The only thing she seemed to have in common with her parents was the many shades of rainbow her hair was.

The nurse walked over to Rainbow Dash, and laid the little filly in her mothers arms. Rainbow Dash looked scrutinizingly at her daughter as Soarin leaned over to look at her. "She is really actually cute." he said, putting his hoof by his daughter. The little filly yawned widely and held on to her fathers hoof. Soarin chuckled softly, tears in his eyes. It was just like when he became a parent for the first time: The tiny little babies looking at him, clinging onto his hoofs and squeaking at him. He had always had a soft spot for children, and it was the same every time he looked at his babies.

Rainbow Dash grudgingly smirked softly at her filly. Then a sudden thought occurred to her, and her eyes widened. "Do...you know who she reminds me of?" She asked the room at large. "Who?" Soarin looked curious. Rainbow Dash hesitated, then said with a shiver, "Rarity."

Soarin laughed loudly and fell over on the cloud floor. He couldn't help it, it was something typical his wife would say. Their daughter reminded her of her close friend Rarity? Soarin thought she did look slightly like Rarity, with her white fur and already fancy mane.

Rainbow Dash when't to sit the child in the cloud crib next to her.

She gently put her daughter down. But instead of laying smoothly in the soft clouds, she when't right through them! "OH MY FLIPING GOD!!!" Rainbow Dash shrieked and dived at floor. She smack her face hard on the clouds. She groaned in pain as the pegasus nurse and doctor tried to make her sit still. "Miss!" the nurse said. "You just gave birth! You could rip something!" Soarin had shrieked along with the whole room. He tried the same thing his wife did several times. He had a few large bruises on his face. He dashed out the nearest window, and wen't into speed dive towards the ground.

He could see his daughter falling through the sky towards the ground. Soarin folded his wings to his side and went into dive mode. He speeded closer towards his daughter. He was so close and....GOT HER! As Soarin grabbed his daughter and held her close, he pulled up from hitting the ground: And did a Sonic Rainbw

The loud sound erupted and echoed around the surrounding land scape. Soarin hovered some feet above the ground to watch the last remnants of his Sonic Rainboom vanish into the air. Everything began to get quite and return to normal after a few seconds. "Well," he said proudly, looking down at his daughter, who was nestled close to his chest. Surprisingly she had fallen quickly back asleep. "Daddy saved you, and did his first Sonic Rainboom!"

He quickly flew back up towards the Clouds Dale hospital, where he knew his mate and the doctors would be worried sick. "Though..." he said, a bit awkwardly. "You're mother already did hers when she only like four..."

It took Soarin a while to find his wife's hospital room, for it was a very BIG hospital. He banged open the door, and winced as a relieved shriek followed. "My baby!" Thank goodness!" Rainbow Dash shrieked, knocking the nurse aside so she could flap over to her husband. She quickly took her daughter out of his hoofs and began hugging and cuddling her. It got very quite as she showered her baby with affection. Eventually Rainbow Dash noticed and looked up. She saw Soarin smiling knowingly at her. "Oh uh, I mean," She looked awkwardly around at the ponies. "Good job Soarin. Glad she's ok".

Soarin laughed at Rainbow Dash trying to put on her 'know-it-all' face again.

The blue stallion turned to the doctors standing around. "Why did she go through the floor?" he asked, stomping his hoof on the cloudly floor for effaces. "I thought you said she 100% pegasus?"

The doctors look alarmed themselves. "I thought she COULD stand on clouds as well, but I suppose not...I guess she'd actually HAVE to be a pegasus!"

He opened his mouth to speak, but was cut off by Rainbow Dash. "Wait!" she glared at the doctors. "What does that mean for ME? We live in a house made entirely out of CLOUDS. I mean, this IS Clouds Dale. What are we supposed to do!? And I have to stay in the hospital with her for about a MONTH. How am I going to sit her down?!"

The doctors looked slightly nervous at what they were about to suggest. Maybe they too knew of Rainbow Dash's famous temper. "Well, there are several things to be done about your house. It is possible to find a builder who can make a house with wooden floors and cloud walls, but there is still a danger of falling either way. Unless you plan to carry her constantly, the option is to move to the ground."

Both the parents gasped. Looks of shock and horror on their faces. "Are you kidding me!?" The parents both shrieked. "I LOVE living in Clouds Dale!"

"And I was BORN here!" Soarin cut in. "We have three other children living at the house! It's their HOME! How are we supposed to tell them we have to move? And back in Pony Ville?!"

Rainbow Dash was shocked at the idea of moving back to Pony Ville. She loved visiting there, after all thats where all of friends lived. But she had missed the clouds and the blue skies and high winds of Clouds Dale. Their three other children were born in Clouds Dale. It would be very hard to tell them they had to leave the only home they've ever known and move onto the hard ground.

"How much would the builder cost to build a half-cloud-half-normal-house?" the Rainbow-maned mare asked. She never had heard of anything like that before. It sounded like something rare and exotic her friend Twilight Sparkle or Rarity would buy. If they ever deemed to marry a pegasus. "It would be extremely expensive, and would take several years to complete. On the highest ranking pegasus could afford one, and most of them have normal homes and prefer not to live around hard objects."

Soarin sighed. He knew it would probably be WAY to much for them to afford. And they certainly didn't have the time or funds to find such a builder. When he finally heard the price it was indeed very costly.

Rainbow Dash stroked her daughters pink and orange mane-tuff as she thought of what to do. "Rainbow Dash?" he asked tentatively. Rainbow Dash looked up from stroking her daughters head to look up at her husband. "What if you go stay with one of you're friends in Pony Ville while I work on finding us a new house around there to buy?"

The blue mares eyebrows lowered in annoyance. She figured it might come to this. She'd have to stay with one of her friends. She wondered which she'd have to stay with. Applejack was her first thought, but the farm seemed a very LOUD place to be raised. After all, they get up at the crack of dawn to do all the farm chores. She thought about Twilight Sparkle, but all she'd head would be 'Magic this.' and 'Magic that.'. She didn't even consider Pinkie Pie...No WAY would she spend a few months with her. She could already picture how that would go...even though Pinkies husband was a quite type, Pinkie Pie was still loud and roady She'd cause a ruckus. Rainbow Dash pushes Rarity out of her mind. She'd no more spend time at Rarities place than she would at Discords. Rainbow Dash chuckled at the idea of living with Discord and his family. She kinda like the idea of spending the few months with her friend Fluttershy. After all, she was quite and gentle, and understood that babies need sleep.

"How about you spend a few months with you're friend Rarity? I'm sure she'd be happy to help you with our daughter. And she's so nice to me every time we come over!"

Rainbow Dash chocked, eyes wide. "Are you kidding me?! Rarity?" She yelped. "No- No WAY am I going to spend several months in RARITIES company. She's got -"

"I know I know." Soarin interrupted knowingly. Rainbow Dash looked slightly taken aback. "You do?" she said, curiously. "Of course I do!" he said. "I understand, Rainbow Dash. I bet you're worried about Spike, aren't you?"

This wasn't at ALL what she had in mind. Why would she be worried about Spike? She was more worried about loosing her nerve around Rarity and over-prissy talking.

"Spike?" she asked. "Why would I be worried about Spike-"

Soarin patted her shoulder. The over all over-knowing way of Soarin annoyed her. "Well, Spike is a dragon after all...And he is getting rather large of late. And Dash told us when we dropped him off at school, that all the kids were scared of Ranisha because her father is a dragon."

"Soarin, I wasn't worried about Spike, I just didn't want-" She was cut off by Soarin smacking her jauntily on the back with his hoof. "Wonderful!" He said happily. "I'll contact Rarity later and see if she's up to it!"

And so thats how it went. For the next month ,Rainbow Dash was in the hospital. And she almost ALWAYS had to be holding her daughter. The nurses would occasionally that turns holding the little Filly, but most the time Rainbow Dash was. They had decided upon calling her Garnet Flare, for her birth stone was Garnet, as she was born in January. Soarin would visit the hospital constantly with their other child: Dash, Salistra and Rainbow-Swish.

He spent most of his time raising their other children, and trying to locate a good house down in Pony Ville to find. When Rainbow Dash was released from the hospital, she spent a few weeks in her Clouds Dale home, before she resigned herself to taking her kids to Rarities house to live for several months, until her husband could either found an open house for sale or had to have on built somewhere.

~The End~

Anyways, Instead of typing some long drawn-out explanation about some things about Garnet-Flare, I thought I would just list it below:

*Garnet flare eventually learns, from Twilight Sparkle, how to magically create her own wings that she can take on and off, much like the ones Twilight made for Rarity.

*Garnet flares earned her 'Rainboom Form' when she went to the top of a giant Clouds Dale mountain, and jumped off(approximately 100,000,000,000,000+ miles in the air. She dived off, and went so fast, did a ten Rainboom in a row. The speed and magical rareness of this caused her normally blue wings to turn pink, and for her to get a rainbow streak in her hair and across her body. The 'Rainboom Form' vanishes when ever she removes her wings. She only uses it when she wants to enter racing contests, or show off.

*One of her best friends in a dragon named Darther - who she is known to have a very large crush on.

*She owns a male tuxido cat named Moel, who is one of Rarities cat, Opal, kittens.

*Her cutie mark represents her love for rare diamonds, and racing.

*Pre her Rainboom For, she used a spell to make herself Anti-electric, meaning she could lay on lightning clouds, a personal favorite of hers.

Whelp - That should be all. Wish me luck in winning her!

Please do not copy, alter, trace, or reproduce in any way, shape or form without my written permission. Thank you.

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Nautilus18

Edited Nov 9, 2018

I love how Rainbow asked herself "Did I cheat with any white unicorns?" like she's scrolling through a mental list of all the stallions she's cheated on him with.